#158 · Your outbound sucks. Here's how to fix it

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My email open rate is over 30% but I get zero replies. I’m targeting lawyers and offering a guarantee with a 1‑month free trial. How can I make my product more appealing?

You need to improve your copy. The gap between where you are now and a successful email is huge, so start by copying proven templates. Check out Instantly’s email templates, pick a few, and then vary them slightly. Run five to ten variations simultaneously to see what resonates. Once you have a few solid templates, you’ll understand how effective cold emails sound and look, which will help you craft better copy for your lawyer niche.

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Xander says he's using cold email with dental clinics and creative agencies, nine inboxes at 270 emails per day, with a 2% reply rate and little to no positive reply. He's been copywriting for 1.5 years, feels his copy is solid, offers guarantee value and free leads, but isn't seeing results. Should he increase to 50 inboxes and 500 emails per day, or try something else?

The main issue is your copy, not the leads or audience. A 2% reply rate can be acceptable for high‑ticket, enterprise‑focused campaigns, but you need to look at the positive reply rate. If your positive reply rate is low (e.g., 5%), then at 10,000 emails a day you’d get only about 10 positive replies, which translates to just a few sales calls. Instead of simply increasing volume, you should fix your copy: test and refine it, ensure it matches the industry and audience, and run at least 1,500 emails before judging performance. Remember that copy is never as solid as it can be; iterate, bend the rules, and see what sticks.

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I sent 204 cold emails with a 32% open rate and zero replies using a personal Gmail account. What should I do to improve replies?

Start with a custom Loom video and send a limited number, like 25, even though that takes more effort. The fact that you sent 204 emails, got a 32% open rate but no replies, suggests there’s something wrong with your copy that’s turning people off. I’d begin with a templated cold email. Remember that 204 sends with zero replies is a reply rate of less than 0.5%, which isn’t terrible but far below the 2‑3% you should aim for. I recommend the same approach I suggested to Jamal: improve your copy and use a proven template.

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I ran my first cold email campaign with a 71% open rate but zero replies. Any advice on optimizing for replies?

A 71% open rate sounds impressive, but opens don’t matter if you get no replies. Stop obsessing over open metrics and focus on response rates. For your first test send around 500 emails—not a thousand—so you can verify deliverability before you turn off open tracking. Once you know the emails are landing, work on the copy: most cold‑email copy is weak, so study proven formulas (like the one in my 56‑minute video) and adapt them to your niche, such as gyms or personal trainers. Even a few percentage‑point lift in reply rate is worth it. Remember, sending 100 emails with no replies isn’t catastrophic, but 500 with zero replies indicates a problem that needs fixing.

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Why don't you verify your email lists, and do you think poor copywriting is causing low open rates?

I don’t verify the first email blast because I’m confident in my copywriting enough to tolerate a higher bounce rate; verification is a trade‑off—better copy reduces spam complaints, so you can accept more bounces. I typically run a quick, unverified campaign to test a market, and if it works I double down and then pay for verification.

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