How would you make an offer for an ecom email marketing agency without mentioning price in the email, and what do you think of my current packaging and pricing?
First, don't mention price in the initial email—it filters out interested prospects before you can qualify them. Instead, wait until the call to discuss pricing; many will happily pay $4,500 once they see your value. Second, simplify your offer: it's currently too complex. Instead of technical details, state clearly what you deliver and the outcome. For example: 'I'll manage your entire email and SMS channel and guarantee you an extra $15,000 per month in the first 90 days, or I'll work for free until we achieve that.' Target businesses making at least $60,000/month so the $3,500 fee is reasonable. This makes the offer easy to understand and focuses on your ability to drive revenue, not on a list of features.